Essay Pattern: Compare & Contrast

Compare & contrast essays are a popular organizational option. Here are some techniques to make this kind of essay truly sing.

Necessary Compare & Contrast Steps: An Overview

In a comparison/contrast essay, a writer must do the following:

  1. Identify and explain three or more key points that two or more subjects have in common.
  2. Show the similarities and differences between these points.
  3. Develop a thesis, indicating his or her position regarding the two subjects. The thesis may indicate that one subject is stronger than the other and that both subjects have strengths, or that both subjects possess noteworthy flaws.

There are two ways to organize a comparison/contrast essay.

Subject By Subject

This organizational pattern is most effective when used on short essays, such as in-class essays. The body of such an essay is organized by discussing one subject, point by point, in complete detail before moving on to the next subject. The writer should select points by which both subjects can be examined. The number of body paragraphs will be determined by the number of points discussed in the essay.  Here is an example:

Body #1Body #2Body #3Body #4Body #5Body #6
Discuss point #1 of the first subject. Discuss point #2 of the first subject. Discuss point #3 of the first subject. Transition to and discuss point # 1 of the second subjectDiscuss point #2 of the second subjectDiscuss point #3 of the second subject

Point By Point

This organizational pattern is most effective when used on longer essays, such as a comparison of two articles, short stories, or novels. The body of such an essay is organized by discussing one point at a time and how it applies to each subject before moving on to the next point. For long works, at least three points should be examined if not more.

Body #1Body #2Body #3Body #4Body #5Body #6
Discuss point #1 of the first subject Discuss point #1 of the second subjectDiscuss point #2 of the first subjectDiscuss point #2 of the second subjectDiscuss point #3 of the first subjectDiscuss point #3 of the second subject

Once you’ve drafted a comparison essay, ask someone else to look over your draft and tell you how effective he or she finds your basic comparison— and why. Then read it over yourself, too, with a critical eye.

Some Questions to Keep in Mind When Checking a Comparison

SUBJECTS OF COMPARISON. What specific subjects does this essay compare? Are those subjects similar enough to justify the comparison? On what basis are they compared? Does the text emphasize the similarities or the differences between them? Or does it give equal weight to both?

PURPOSE AND AUDIENCE. Who are the intended readers, and what is the general purpose of the comparison—to inform? to evaluate? some other purpose? Does the comparison achieve this purpose? If not, what changes might help? What background information is included, and is it sufficient for the intended readers to fully understand the text? Are there any key terms that readers might need to have defined?

THE POINT. What is the main point of the essay? Has it been made clear to the reader? Is there an explicit thesis statement? If not, should there be

ORGANIZATION. How is the essay organized? Where does it use the point-by-point method of organization? The subject-by-subject method? When comparing subjects point by point, does the essay give more or less equal weight to each subject? When treating first one subject and then the other, does the essay follow more or less the same order in laying out the points of comparison for each subject?

POINTS OF COMPARISON. What are the specific points of comparison in the essay? Are they sufficient to convince the reader that the comparison is valid? Do they cover the same elements in both subjects? Have any important points been omitted—and if so, what are they?

OTHER METHODS. What other methods are used besides comparison and contrast? Does the essay classify subjects? Define them? Make an argument about them? What other methods might support the comparison?


Kaylan | 2019

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